Ow

I should stop hitting my forehead on things.

Editing

I read an article on Salon that begins with this sentence

Having stampeded his ill-informed predecessor into a series of catastrophic blunders, it appears that Dick Cheney has declared open bureaucratic war -- the only kind he's ever known how to fight -- upon President Barack Obama.

Do you see anything wrong with it or is it all in my head?

EDIT: Since I'm discussing this with the author, I'd like as many people giving their opinions as possible, even if you echo someone who has already answered, please.